Title: Stage Six – Rise of the Machines
Author: Bj Jones
Creative Consultant: Timothy Quinn
Beta: Gil & Janet
Author’s Note: This Arc will tie up loose threads from previous Arcs and set up storyline for upcoming Arcs. Even if you’ve read Family a dozen times, make sure to have read the re-posting.
Artist: Taibhrigh
I am so very impressed! The story is so – well I just don’t have the words to express how I feel. And bringing in Tony Stark and Dean with the MTI and how Dean IS smart. HUGS!!! I love the original by BJ and bringing it into this arc, you made by day, month and even year! Thanks guys I am at work so can not read the new chapter but I am burning rubber on the way home so I can read!!!
Thanks again for sharing!
Really great story.
Thank you all for your hard work.
I look forward to the rest of this arc.
So, it’s been great reading the arc so far, and just had a question, if Ellis’ mate got to find out that she’s back, why couldn’t the boys find out that he’s back?
Mainly do to what exactly just happened. Aberline/Boyd is trusting Horatio/Speed to raise Elizabeth and not interfere.
The other two wouldn’t stay away and would influence the Mate – hence the not telling them.
It’s not a standard rule to tell or not – it comes down to the situation.
I love this story! Each stage becomes more intriguing and interesting than the last. Love the characters you’ve added too. The only thing is that there are some I am not familiar with, especialy the mutants. Will they be added to the Wikki?
Once Evolution is finished posting – we’ll be uploading the new characters to the wiki.
And making a few new sections:
Crimson Moon
Mutants/Xavier’s School for the Gifted
There are images of some of the new guys in the two postings I did of Evolution: Intro to new characters… Which probably need to do another one of those today *hmmm*
Great job boss loving this as it progresses 🙂 I may have just streamlined all the parts the last two days